Good story that everyone needs to read. I think you could have included some tips on how people can reduce greenhouse gases, recycle or use less energy.
For the grammar help...we will go through this together.
As a movie review I find this very confusing. Where did the robots come from? How do they stop them? What do the robots want? You get too specific with the plot, when the reader has no idea what you're talking about. Also there is no film facts: Director, cast, rating, box office earnings. more…
I know this restaurant well as I live near here and eat here often.
As far as a review goes it covers all the main points: the food, decor, staff, location etc. However, it is a little confusing. Your sentence structure, grammar, choice of vocab and spelling aren't great. You write some of this in the past tense 'if you were bored' more…
Recent comments (4)
In response to: "GlobaL WarMing" 773 days old
by Aj Marcus [Visitor]
Good story that everyone needs to read. I think you could have included some tips on how people can reduce greenhouse gases, recycle or use less energy.
For the grammar help...we will go through this together.
Good Work. more…
In response to: "AboUt Me" 773 days old
by Aj Marcus [Visitor]
Generally good here. Some problems with grammar that we can go through next term more…
In response to: "Movie~~" 773 days old
by Aj Marcus [Visitor]
Is it not autobots v decepticons?
As a movie review I find this very confusing. Where did the robots come from? How do they stop them? What do the robots want? You get too specific with the plot, when the reader has no idea what you're talking about. Also there is no film facts: Director, cast, rating, box office earnings.
more…
In response to: "ResTaurAnT" 773 days old
by Aj Marcus [Visitor]
I know this restaurant well as I live near here and eat here often.
As far as a review goes it covers all the main points: the food, decor, staff, location etc. However, it is a little confusing. Your sentence structure, grammar, choice of vocab and spelling aren't great. You write some of this in the past tense 'if you were bored' more…