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In response to:GlobaL WarMing

Sun, 30 Sep 2007 07:02:59 +0200

Good story that everyone needs to read. I think you could have included some tips on how people can reduce greenhouse gases, recycle or use less energy.

For the grammar help...we will go through this together.

Good Work.

In response to:AboUt Me

Sun, 30 Sep 2007 06:58:35 +0200

Generally good here. Some problems with grammar that we can go through next term

In response to:Movie~~

Sun, 30 Sep 2007 06:55:02 +0200

Is it not autobots v decepticons?

As a movie review I find this very confusing. Where did the robots come from? How do they stop them? What do the robots want? You get too specific with the plot, when the reader has no idea what you're talking about. Also there is no film facts: Director, cast, rating, box office earnings.

A good try, but confusing and missing important information.

3/5

In response to:ResTaurAnT

Sun, 30 Sep 2007 06:48:02 +0200

I know this restaurant well as I live near here and eat here often.

As far as a review goes it covers all the main points: the food, decor, staff, location etc. However, it is a little confusing. Your sentence structure, grammar, choice of vocab and spelling aren't great. You write some of this in the past tense 'if you were bored'? Why would you use the past tense here? Use present simple tense to talk about everyday things, facts or general statements. Only use the simple past if you are refering to a finished action/event in the past.

3/5